I put the comment in the wrong place: Comment on the best bits: Most of this is 'best bits' because you've used the camera really steadily and thoroughly.The shots are cleanly done with no distractions, and you've managed to push the edit so that the action rolls on.
Things you can improve: The camera let you down in the tracking shot across the passageway when you had a burn out of light that was really effective, and the camera automatically tried to adjust for this. And there are two packages? That's a continuity glitch.
Marks are out of 3 for this: 0 means you haven't done it. 1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work. 2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK. 3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.
CAMERA Medium Shot MS 3 Long Shot LS 3 Close Up CU 3 XLS - extreme long shot 2 XCU - extreme close up 3 Pan 3 Tilt 2 Zoom 2 Cross focus 1 Deep focus 1 Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 3 Point of View - POV 2 Use of tripod 3
I put the comment in the wrong place:
ReplyDeleteComment on the best bits: Most of this is 'best bits' because you've used the camera really steadily and thoroughly.The shots are cleanly done with no distractions, and you've managed to push the edit so that the action rolls on.
Things you can improve:
The camera let you down in the tracking shot across the passageway when you had a burn out of light that was really effective, and the camera automatically tried to adjust for this. And there are two packages? That's a continuity glitch.
Marks are out of 3 for this:
0 means you haven't done it.
1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.
CAMERA
Medium Shot MS 3
Long Shot LS 3
Close Up CU 3
XLS - extreme long shot 2
XCU - extreme close up 3
Pan 3
Tilt 2
Zoom 2
Cross focus 1
Deep focus 1
Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 3
Point of View - POV 2
Use of tripod 3
EDIT
Shot - reverse shot 3
Establishing shot 3
Cut 3
Dissolve 3
Total out of 54 = 43