Monday, 29 June 2009


Thank you Tom. Evaluation work is next - follow the instructions either from the board, or from - you should read the whole blog.

dyslexia lures, KO?


  1. Comment on the best bits: Most of this is 'best bits' because you've used the camera really steadily and thoroughly.The shots are cleanly done with no distractions, and you've managed to push the edit so that the action rolls on.
    Excellent work.

    Things you can improve:
    The camera let you down in the tracking shot across the passageway when you had a burn out of light that was really effective, and the camera automatically tried to adjust for this.

    Marks are out of 3 for this:
    0 means you haven't done it.
    1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
    2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
    3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.

    Medium Shot MS 3
    Long Shot LS 3
    Close Up CU 3
    XLS - extreme long shot 2
    XCU - extreme close up 3
    Pan 3
    Tilt 2
    Zoom 2
    Cross focus 1
    Deep focus 1
    Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 3
    Point of View - POV 2
    Use of tripod 3

    Shot - reverse shot 3
    Establishing shot 3
    Cut 3
    Dissolve 3

    Total out of 54 =