Friday, 7 May 2010
Grading for Advanced Portfolio
MAIN TASK: FILM
WWW:
You have demonstrated excellence in your creative use of the required technical skills. Your shots are steady, carefully framed and appropriate to the set task. You have used appropriate and varied shot transitions and your use of sound adds to the message of the film.
EBI:
I originally felt meaning would be more apparent to the viewer with the inclusion of another scene. We discussed this and I now understand your reasons for not adding the scene and am happy for it to remain as is.
36/40
ANCILLARY TASKS: ARTICLE AND ADVERT
WWW:
You have demonstrated excellence in the creative use of PhotoShop and InDesign to create 2 very convincing product which promote your film and the branding is evident throughout. You have shown an excellent knowledge of the conventions of page layout and poster design, the need for a variety of font sizes and the integration of language and text. Your language and mode of address are accurate and the article is interseting to read. You have carefully chosen your shots and you have demonstrated advances skills in manipulation of both text and photographs.
Poster: 10/10
Article 10/10
Planning:
WWW:
Thorough research and planning throughout with excellent time management.
There is excellent research into similar products
Time management is excellent
Excellent level of care in the presentation of research and planning
There is excellent use of ICT in the presentation of your planning
20/20
TOTAL SO FAR: 76/100
WWW:
You have demonstrated excellence in your creative use of the required technical skills. Your shots are steady, carefully framed and appropriate to the set task. You have used appropriate and varied shot transitions and your use of sound adds to the message of the film.
EBI:
I originally felt meaning would be more apparent to the viewer with the inclusion of another scene. We discussed this and I now understand your reasons for not adding the scene and am happy for it to remain as is.
36/40
ANCILLARY TASKS: ARTICLE AND ADVERT
WWW:
You have demonstrated excellence in the creative use of PhotoShop and InDesign to create 2 very convincing product which promote your film and the branding is evident throughout. You have shown an excellent knowledge of the conventions of page layout and poster design, the need for a variety of font sizes and the integration of language and text. Your language and mode of address are accurate and the article is interseting to read. You have carefully chosen your shots and you have demonstrated advances skills in manipulation of both text and photographs.
Poster: 10/10
Article 10/10
Planning:
WWW:
Thorough research and planning throughout with excellent time management.
There is excellent research into similar products
Time management is excellent
Excellent level of care in the presentation of research and planning
There is excellent use of ICT in the presentation of your planning
20/20
TOTAL SO FAR: 76/100
Evaluation Feedback: 18/20
The commentary really is an excellent response to questions 1 & 2.
Your Scribd documents are also an excellent response to 3 & 4. I think had the full response been on the commentary it would be worthy of full marks but it is still an excellent overall 18. Well done!
Your Scribd documents are also an excellent response to 3 & 4. I think had the full response been on the commentary it would be worthy of full marks but it is still an excellent overall 18. Well done!
Friday, 30 April 2010
Thursday, 29 April 2010
Evaluation feedback:
Tom can you organise your evaluation responses under post headings so I and the moderator can see which questions you are answering. It still doesn't seem that you have answered all the questions clearly.
Wednesday, 21 April 2010
This section of the evaluation answers question 4,
What have you learned from your audience feedback?
evaluiaton
What have you learned from your audience feedback?
evaluiaton
Tuesday, 20 April 2010
Friday, 26 March 2010
Friday, 19 March 2010
Evaluation Section 1
This section of the evaluation features comments on the following questions in this general order
-In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions?
-How did you use new media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages
-How effective is the combination of your main product and your ancillary task
-In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions?
-How did you use new media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages
-How effective is the combination of your main product and your ancillary task
Tuesday, 9 March 2010
Evaluation Proposal
For my evaluation I will record a directors commentary over the top of my film, this will be shown in the dvd extras. The voice over will talk the audience through the film, commenting on the use of production techniques, how I achieved certain shots and what I wanted to accomplish in each individual scenes. The film can be paused by me when I want to go into deeper analysis and will hep the understanding of the film.
The commentary will also cover the audience aspect of the film and show how I targeted my audience and what changes were made to help the understanding of the audience.
The commentary will also cover the audience aspect of the film and show how I targeted my audience and what changes were made to help the understanding of the audience.
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